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Neopan Acros thru M6-10.jpg by menthel, on Flickr
Me in my street mood. Acros in rodinal and to me it looks superb! Shame most places are out of stock of 35mm at present.
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Neopan Acros thru M6-10.jpg by menthel, on Flickr
Me in my street mood. Acros in rodinal and to me it looks superb! Shame most places are out of stock of 35mm at present.
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Not used film for years so can't really comment on that aspect
Was wondering about the comp on this though,could it be improved with a slice taken off both verticals
Think 'Not Stalking' might be more apt for the title btw
Was wondering about the comp on this though,could it be improved with a slice taken off both verticals
Think 'Not Stalking' might be more apt for the title btw
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Here's my take on the crop,just trying to eliminate the chairs and road sign more than anything
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EDIT: My bad, thought it was a critique thread
Crit away, its in the feedback and critique section so you can crit anything in this section!
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Fair enough
I jsut noted that it looked like the 2 ladies are staring at a tree, causing the viewers focus to join in with them and stare at the tree, which I don't think is where you wished the focal point to be.
Also the lady on the right has a lamp sprouting from her head and the lady on the left has a tree from hers.
Gotta love creepin' on strangers though
I jsut noted that it looked like the 2 ladies are staring at a tree, causing the viewers focus to join in with them and stare at the tree, which I don't think is where you wished the focal point to be.
Also the lady on the right has a lamp sprouting from her head and the lady on the left has a tree from hers.
Gotta love creepin' on strangers though
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Perhaps they are both admiring the tree? I don't mind them staring off too much but it may well be better into empty space rather than the tree. As for the lamp and tree, I have only noticed them now you have mentioned them, probably becoause they are relatively OOF. I will try to keep my eye out next time!
Thanks very much for spending the time to crit the image.
I don't mind them staring off too much but it may well be better into empty space rather than the tree. As for the lamp and tree, I have only noticed them now you have mentioned them, probably becoause they are relatively OOF. I will try to keep my eye out next time! Thanks very much for spending the time to crit the image.