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Thanks Twist, I made it Portrait rather than landscape alas...:-(
No worries. Taken with a fisheye, not always to peoples taste I know. But I am happy with the bendy skyscrapers, just a different point of view. I do have narrower ones and straight buildings...
There was as I took a shot of this mountain range last year. Although I did clone out some electric/telephone poles and maybe a car or bits of cars.Re 1 - the cut off mountain puts me off as does the parked cars. Was there a better place to shoot from. Looks a gorgeous place.
Re 1 - the cut off mountain puts me off as does the parked cars. Was there a better place to shoot from. Looks a gorgeous place.
The 3 outdoor shots are all potentially good, but have niggles that could have been 'fixed' easily, mostly around the cropping as already noted. It's always good to frame up with a little extra space so that tweaks etc don't compromise the subject.
May have been potential with number 1 but the light, tight crop, parked cars, lack of compositional thought is counting against it. Need to work a scene harder, it doesn’t matter how beautiful it is to your eyes composition and light are so important, they can turn the most mundane scene into something special but an epic scene in midday light and little compositional thought doesn’t work. The rest aren’t landscapes but reasonable holiday snaps.
There was as I took a shot of this mountain range last year. Although I did clone out some electric/telephone poles and maybe a car or bits of cars.
If the OP had gone the other side of the car park he would have got a shot like this
I will remove my shot if the OP so wishes.
It was an amazing place, my only disappointment was poverty amongst the locals, they seemed to be living in old cars and tents on the road side, in comparison to the wealth of the Honolulu residents. But as my sister says, thats America....