Daryl, the shadows are pretty harsh, will your software pull them back a bit (eg under the hat brim)? I'm guessing this wasn't the kind of shot where you could get him to hold a reflector to open them up a bit! That urn to the left is a bit distracting, and it's hard to see what you could have done... if you'd moved to the left his face would have merged more with the darker area behind... maybe lowering your pov might have helped? But all that said, there's lots of lovely detail in his face. Like it.