Olympics 2012 - Ladies Marathon

[denz1968]

4 of my shots from last Sundays Ladies Marathon.


olympics marathon 2 by denz1968, on Flickr

Not sure on the focussing on this one


olympic marathon 1 by denz1968, on Flickr


Kizaki by denz1968, on Flickr


olympic rings by denz1968, on Flickr

Any comments or improvement pointers appreciated.

Thanks

 

[feek]

Not a bad set. On #1 and #3 you have them sloping down to the left. Try making sure the horizon is straight. I think you're right about #2, it looks OOF to me.

 

[denz1968]

Hopefully better


DSC_2798 by denz1968, on Flickr

 

[denz1968]

And again straightened up - looking better?


Kizaki2 by denz1968, on Flickr

 

[feek]

Much improved.

 

[denz1968]

thanks mate, just learnt to look deeper at what I post before I post it.