Nice! I'm a sucker for BC's. Love the one ear up one ear down pose!
If anything I'm finding the foreground rocks a little distracting and wondering if you can tone them down a bit so Pilot is more the focal and bright point. So even tho there is so much detail and context, your eyes are drawn to him more.
Hmm, of course, YMMV, as I'm not much good with this stuff I struggle with composition anything good I get is down to luck not judgment!