Portrait Flyer, Feedback please...

L.Culley

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Hi all, have just put this together, 'I' think it's ok but I've learnt that 2 heads a better than one and a forum is better than two., so im hoping for comments, is it suitable? could anything be changed? what works? what doesnt??
Thanks all.

Leon

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The flyer seems nicely designed, although I'm sure you'll get comments on the selective colour, which is not my favourite thing either. On the design front, I wonder if there should perhaps be just a little bit less description on the back, with the text slightly bigger, and the website address more prominent?

Otherwise, just read through your text. Two notes, why are "Dedicated", "Professional" and "Qualified" capitalised? Also you have put an apostrophe in "fee's" where there should be none (should just be "fees"). They may seem like little things, but grammar mistakes etc. can detract from the professionalism of a brand/photographer.
 
tinite said:
The flyer seems nicely designed, although I'm sure you'll get comments on the selective colour, which is not my favourite thing either. On the design front, I wonder if there should perhaps be just a little bit less description on the back, with the text slightly bigger, and the website address more prominent?

Otherwise, just read through your text. Two notes, why are "Dedicated", "Professional" and "Qualified" capitalised? Also you have put an apostrophe in "fee's" where there should be none (should just be "fees"). They may seem like little things, but grammar mistakes etc. can detract from the professionalism of a brand/photographer.
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Fantastic feedback. thankyou
 
yeah will do, i will be making all revisions tonight, and ordering tonight while in still tipsey enough to ignore the fact my bank tells me i really shouldnt lol.
really appreciate the feedback, like i said, a forum is the only place to come for crit :)
 
Not a bad general layout.. but the text reads very badly ("you can be sure of recieving standards second to none") and I think it's over-written. It's too much for one paragraph if you want to get a message across clearly.

What size is the flier? and what font size is the text message?
 
Alastair said:
Not a bad general layout.. but the text reads very badly ("you can be sure of recieving standards second to none") and I think it's over-written. It's too much for one paragraph if you want to get a message across clearly.

What size is the flier? and what font size is the text message?
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Thanks for your feedback, the flyer is A5, font size is 12....

How would you re-word it???

leon
 
Prehaps slightly less wordy, but I feel lilke it doesnt sit right size ways....... feedback would be really REALLY handy...

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ok, have increased the font size, what are peoples thoughts now...

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OK, have increased main text font size, altered spelling mistakes, moved tel numbers to make room to make www. address bigger, and made term and conditions font smaller...
whats the prognoses doc??
also, what is peoples views on the pictures.. do they give off the right impression???

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well i said last night i was going to to order before i sobered uo to much, instead i fell asleep.... :D so no, not ordered. so tect less bold hey... hand on
 
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