Portrait Of My Daughter Chloe

I think it could be a lovely picture and Chloe is absolutely gorgeous but the thick strand of hair across the pupil is just too distracting for me and i think perhaps some of the highlights on her face are blown or very nearly blown? JMO though..
 
Agree about the highlights, they are well blown, and I'd consider a hard crop from the right and bottom.

She's a bonny wee thing, if you could get the technicals more into shape, then it would really sing.
 
Agree about the hair as well, it is a little too distracting. Also perhaps get her whole head in and a bit less body too? Nice effort though, and welcome :)
 
Too much hair over her eyes, and blown highlights as has already been mentioned, sorry :(
 
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