poster idea

[Loch]

Hi All,

I had this thought in a local cafe a few days ago, then I thought as I was making it, it might be quite good as a weight watchers advert with some sort of clever tagline.

Anyway this is what I have done so far, I'm not sure wheather to add ropes, a tent, a flag and maybe a few circling birds?

I also tryed to blur out the bottom section to give a sence of height, not sure if it works.

Let me know what you think

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2697/4094124124_55881a8e1c_b.jpg


Heres one with the birds-

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2629/4093500999_4901f463aa_b.jpg

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[Kemble3]

I am trying to work out the correlation between people climbing a slice of cake and WeightWatchers. IMHO the picture say “To reach the top, eat lots of cake” If you were trying to portray something like “Conquering your eating habits” then I do not get this message.

Also be careful if you have used the official WeighWatchers official logo without their permission.

 

[Loch]

Hi Kemble3

Thanks for your comment, I maybe shouldnt have commented on the idea behind the image. I am looking for critique on the image itself.

 

[shardsta]

I like it, my only comment would be that they are dressed for cold weather and the cake does not look cold! Needs a bit of icing sugar

 

[Squawk]

I think its great as a concept. You have defeated cake! The issue might be having a big old picture of a piece of cake on the wall as a temptation.

 

[gingerweasel]

That's some great photoshop work.

Also be careful if you have used the official WeighWatchers official logo without their permission.

I agree, this could get you into trouble. Companies have to protect their trademarks or they can lose them.

 

[Nethawk]

Nice work, though the message is a bit vague. I'd never mind the birds - the less outside elements to interfere with scale, the better.