Poster Test WIP

[Loch]

Hi All,

I know this is abit different,but I wanted to work on my photoshop skills and I had a funny Idea for a poster for insect repellent.

Anyway take a look and C+C please (It is a work in progress)

Thanks!!

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[richpips]

Interesting.

I think you'd do well to straighten up the verticals (barrel distortion).

White balance could do with being less blue.

Not enough contrast between the bug and the background.

Plus the light cutting into the door is too much, even though I get the bright light thing.

 

[andiphoto]

how did you get the cockroach to look like it had the same lighting as the corridor.

 

[andy.m]

very "naked lunch"

 

[wilmorh]

Ha, nothing wrong with playing around and having fun

As a work in progress, it def has potential

 

[CGeezer]

I feel like I want to buy whatever it is you are selling now