Hi, Sarah, if direction came out how you anticipated then well done. It does have a candid feel to it. There are issues, for me, it's blurred, as you said, and I suspect this wasn't intention?? The sky is blown and although you've captured some of the waves, they fade into the sky.
Fear, I like the concept and how the inscriptions have faded over time. The Bg is a distraction and although it adds to the narrative and context, I find them distracting. One idea might have been to photographed closer and really drawn attention to the weathered headstone.
Cheers.