Not sure what you were aiming for there but you've got some very extreme lighting going on there. There are blown whites and blacked out sections all quite close together.
There are no wrongs and rights to this stuff but there is getting the shot you visualised or missing it. The best way to learn about these shots is to take them and experiment.
Grease-proof paper in a U shape over an Anglepoise works well as a diffuser - if you try this, move the light just out of camera shot for the softest light
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