Well - overall, I like the location and the fact that you've managed to avoid the milling throngs of people that have been crawling all over the place like ants every time I've been on the top when the weather's been half decent. Suppose thats what you get when the mountain has a cafe on top and a railway up to it :shrug:
1) - bit of a strange look going on with the sky... were you using a polarising filter? I know that polarisers cause a similar effect with wide angle lenses, purely becuaseof the field of view the WA lens covers. Also, the shot is just a tad cold looking - even for velvia it's a little blue. I like the composition, and it still does the trick for me - it makes me want to strap on my boots and get out there walking!
2) Same comments about colour balance, coomposition's nice, though I quite liked a 6x7 portrait crop, losing some of the expanse of rock at the bottom. Don't get me wrong, the rocks provide great foreground interest, though with the full frame, it's just a wee bit overpowering for me.
3) Pity you couldn't have hung on for a while, until the main ridge was clear of cloud-shadows - though I know it's often a problem if you're out for the days walking, the pressures of getting back to the car before the car-park is bolted, or getting to the pub before they stop serving food, or simply, not annoying your walking mates!
Still - as I said above, it's a set that makes me want to pull my boots on and get out on the hill, so