Some of my work

DannyDMR

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Been trying out Pro Show Gold and made a Portfolio with some of the shots i have captured over the last 4-5 months. Hope you enjoy! please bear in mind im no Pro but i do love what i do and hope i am on the right track to becoming as good as some of you guys.

Hope this works as it's on my facebook page and should be set to public

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=10150357642568157

(I will point out now that it's just over 7 minutes long and plays classical piano music ;)
 
You are lucky on this one Daniel as I very rarely click links to view stuff :D Not sure if you are after advice on the video or the shots :shrug: You have captured some good ones. My advice however would be to post them in the relevant sections for honest feedback. Dont post too many at once, this will then give you a chance to absorb any advice given.
 
Danial,
Don't think that I can offer any advice as you are a far superior photographer than me.
I really enjoyed watching your video all the way through, I might add as normally I would flick through a couple of shots and the move on.

Well done Matey!
 
Sleepydawg said:
Danial,
Don't think that I can offer any advice as you are a far superior photographer than me.
I really enjoyed watching your video all the way through, I might add as normally I would flick through a couple of shots and the move on.

Well done Matey!
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Thanks m8, thats cheered me right up :)
 
I watched this first minute or so. Advice if you're going to put that on your site: Drop the transitions. Well, drop some of them, it looks as if you've used every one possible and comes off as cheesy. :thumbs: I would also try to maximise the area used for photographs to show them off to their best, and lose the black space.

I would look for some more engaging music as the twinkly piano strikes me as a bit nostalgic - maybe appealing to the kids' grandparents, but I think something more fun and energetic would get more people excited about a shoot with you.

I wouldn't think many people would sit down and watch seven minutes + but going off the other comments here maybe I'm wrong. :)
 
Agree about the transitions - maybe stick to one or two. I also think its too long and there are some very similar images, or images of the same people, so some could maybe be removed? Or else do several shorter slide presentations, one for each section?
 
Jayst84 said:
I watched this first minute or so. Advice if you're going to put that on your site: Drop the transitions. Well, drop some of them, it looks as if you've used every one possible and comes off as cheesy. :thumbs: I would also try to maximise the area used for photographs to show them off to their best, and lose the black space.

I would look for some more engaging music as the twinkly piano strikes me as a bit nostalgic - maybe appealing to the kids' grandparents, but I think something more fun and energetic would get more people excited about a shoot with you.

I wouldn't think many people would sit down and watch seven minutes + but going off the other comments here maybe I'm wrong. :)
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Have to say adgreed with all the above :)
 
Nice one cheers guys, i was a bit worried it was a tad long lol, maybe i will do separate ones for each and take a few out as well. I'll have another play this weekend
 
at work at the moment and cant access facebook, but what i did notice is your just down the road from me (im in lowestoft)... nice to know theres a local tog on here.
 
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