Sophie and Leila

[jamesward93]

Another fashion style image. C+C please

 

[garymercer]

I like it, however...

...I think the blue marks on the wood (crate??) are distracting and look like they're coming out of the models head. I might be inclined to try and clone them out.

I'm not too sure on the shadow on the right either.

I am by no means an expert so take these comments with a pinch of salt!

 

[natjag]

This is a great shot. nice a colourful. The angle seems too much for me. Reading in another of your posts about aiming to submit to fashion mags, I would study them a bit closer. You can clearly take a good photo, but I feel this is lacking the edge to get a foot in the door with the high end mags. I'm sure you can do it. Once you hit on the formula you'll get it every time.

 

[photochimp]

I like this, the models have an sort of mannequin look

 

[Betty]

I agree with Gary about the blue marks on the crate, otherwise

 

[englandshottest2]

love this image , it is a shame the blue paint is on the same level as her head!

 

[EdinburghGary]

I can ignore the paint, lovely shot

 

[gingerjon]

It's a personal thing but I'd rather they were both either looking at the viewer or both looking away. Great poses and attitude though.

 

[ldwallis]

I think I prefer it without, Nice shot though!

(VERY quick edit)