Spring Brings New Things...

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This is a recent Maternity shoot I did for my cousin... just wanted to share and any C&C welcome. Thanks for looking


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Really like no4.
No1 I think would be improved if the flowers on the branches above her head were also out of focus.
No2 and no3 I find the out of focus flowers in front of the subject a distraction, and think the girl on the right of no2 should be more visible, as its a good idea.
Hope this helps.
 
the pose the lighting just superb No 4 for me too it stunning :clap:

No 2 not so keen as you cut a child in half :exit:

No 3 You've cut off her hand :(


Les
 
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Yup. #4 for me too. Like the composition/light. 2/3 a bit tight in the frame for me.

#1 is a nearly but not quite IMHO. his finger blends into the tattoo. The blossom detracts from the scan. The OOF bench draws my eye. The scan it's is covering part of his head. I'm being ultra picky but I guess that's because there's a good shot waiting there.

S
 
4 fab obviously, you must have been well pleased with that when you viewed it back on the screen :)
Love 1 too others are great too.
Sorry can't add more detailed crit, I don't look that deep into the images.

Gaz
 
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