Beginner Straight out of the camera, no pp

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Took this image of a Turkish woman and her baby, on a small island off the Turkish coast. I've posted it 'as is' with no pp whatsoever. It's probably got lots wrong with it, but, as a beginner, I'm quite proud of it. Bit of a 'wow, moment going on for me.

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Ok! Gimme a minute, think I got that wrong. Will try again...old man syndrome methinks.
 
i just tightened the crop on it brom .a bit of a distraction with the background.im no expert btw
 

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You have the exposure correct which is good, The cropped version does look better as the background is quite busy.

Nothing wrong with this photo but just a thought, you could experiment with different shooting positions. Such as a step to the left would have got the baby's whole face in. Then you could wait for the change in expression (hopefully a smile) and get some eye contact.

Keep shooting.
 
Karl12347 said:
You have the exposure correct which is good, The cropped version does look better as the background is quite busy.

Nothing wrong with this photo but just a thought, you could experiment with different shooting positions. Such as a step to the left would have got the baby's whole face in. Then you could wait for the change in expression (hopefully a smile) and get some eye contact.

Keep shooting.
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:agree: if you get the chance its always better to take a few different angles, then sort out the best when you get home.
 
Thanks to all for the advice and encouragement it's much appreciated. You wouldn't believe how many mosquito bites I got getting that shot, still, I think it was well worth it. :)
 
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