Sunset over Windermere

[John wells]

 

[UKmitch86]

Could be my monitor but I find this very dark. The wall bottom right I find instrusive - I wonder was there possibly a better view point from the jetty or atop the wall?

 

[Iiyama]

I agree with the above comments. Especially the wall on the bottom right, this is what my eye was drawn to not the sunset.

 

[Stuart Mc]

Yep it's hard to comment on the composition etc. as it's a fair bit underexposed and needs rescuing a bit in PP

 

[John wells]

Could be my monitor but I find this very dark. The wall bottom right I find instrusive - I wonder was there possibly a better view point from the jetty or atop the wall?

Would be difficult to get on top of the wall but will try to lighten the mood...

 

[HBeevers]

Just a suggestion but you could crop the lower 3rd out so the horizon is on the lower 3rds line, it may improve the wall on the right's effect on the composition.

I quite like the exposure, it's just making more of the highlights on the water.

 

[John wells]

It's an interesting suggestion H, I'll have a play cheers