Sunset - Portishead

[Cavking]

This was taken in Portishead in Somerset

I would love to hear your comments and see any improvements that you have in mind.

Shane

 

[Cavking]

This was another at the same location... Although a different bench... (I hope this isnt a bench obsession im going through...

You comments are welcome and any edits you have in mind too..

Kind regards

Shane

 

[sue]

Really like the colours in both, they are lovely. Well done.
The first one, I personally find the sun a little bright, dont know about the conditions and timing, but might have worked a bit better if the sun was just slightly lower, but thats just me.

 

[Cavking]

Thanks for the comment, I would have loved for the sun to have been centralised on the two people too..

The sun goes quickly when it starts to set!

 

[simonkit]

1st one especially works really well - if you want to reduce the harshness of the sun, a little PP should manage it quite easily

simon

 

[Tyke Tiler]

Love them both! I agree with the above too, maybe clone out the bird as well. Excellent shots imho.
T.

 

[simmo]

I like them both but no1 really stands out great composition

 

[Cavking]

Thanks guys

And thank you for the ideas also!

Shane

 

[Cavking]

Would you consider this as an improvement?

 

[ben g]

yes, i think the second edit is better, nice shot

 

[Dark Star]

2nd edit is better yes, but both good!

2nd image (empty bench) could do with a degree of so rotation clockwise, sea level looks a bit skewiff!

 

[Cavking]

2nd image (empty bench) could do with a degree of so rotation clockwise, sea level looks a bit skewiff!

I never noticed that! thanks fr pointing that out

Ill get it sorted!!!

~CK

 

[Cavking]

Hows that?