Yus, its only an opinion mind...
This is "Transport", I'm assuming the jet is the feature of the picture.
I think the jet is lost in its surroundings.
Its not a HDR beef, the picture is doable with HDR, I just feel there ought to be a favourable balance between the subject and its surroundings.
The jet is competing for attention with the HDR sky, and losing.
The jet should be at least as dramatic as the sky don't you think ?
Or maybe the sky needs turning down a few notches, and the jet up..
surely the sky and foreground are secondary