I would be tempted to try and crop the roof out, or clone it out with the hedge, just to see what it was like. I would also try to remove the small conifer that's growing out her left shoulder, again 'just to see' if it was an improvement.
Pity about the hair over her eye and I'm with CT that a longer shot would have been nice with more of the dress showing as it's a lovely colour.
I would imagine she will be very pleased with the shots.