The Long Sleep

[mant01]

I did this one the other day and quite liked how it came out. Pretty much what I was trying to achieve. Comments welcome, thanks

The Long Sleep

 

[TheThistle]

Hi John!

I'm I right in saying this is an entrance to a tomb!

I like this but IMO it needs something to make it pop even more, up the contrast maybe? also, I would crop the bottom off just below the first step.

At the end of the day if you're happy with it, job done


Graham

 

[MWHCVT]

I think that it works well, I like the processing but I do think that it needs a little more to show where you are to give it some context if that makes sense

Matt
MWHCVT

 

[mant01]

Thanks for the replies. The outside frame of the pic was actually a window in an old building. I decided to use some steps off a different image to lead into the shot, then I added the door.
My idea was to do a window to the soul image but the door being open and the soul gone. That was why I called it The Long Sleep as if the persons was dead and the soul was gone.

I'll try and play with the contrast etc to make it pop more