Critique Toddler and baby shoot

[Jamie0690]

Just having a practice with a family members kids. Just want to know what people think. Struggled with getting the toddler to look at me. Any tips?

 

[huffy]

I think the last shot is the best of the group, the expression makes it for me.

The 1st I feel has too much space of the left and distracts from the image as a whole, a square crop of the child and bubbles may be better?

 

[Fatheadedlizard]

May get a few more comments if you put bigger pics up (people don't like to have to click to view)

First one is beautiful but would of liked her over to the right.

Not keen on the angle for the sleeping baby one he looks odd to me, but overall bet the parents love them.

Squeaky toys are a good shout or have their parents behind you making goo goo noises