Urban sunrise & beach shots

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Three here that i took last week...

This one was taken from my back yard in Sheffield.


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One taken from Southport looking across the Ribble estuary towards Blackpool


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Finally, one of Southport Pier (not so sure about this one)...


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C&C welcome :)
 
Hi Bongo :) The two working best for me are 1 and 3. The first has great colours and the contrail (?) really gets your attention. The third really brings out the emptiness.

The second for me doesn't have much. There's no real focal point and the colours aren't strong enough to grab your attention
 
I think these are all shots that when you first see them, the expanse of the view makes you go wow, yet on film (or digital film) it doesn't work. You need some strong focal point to hold the viewers attention.
 
:agree: There is something not quite dynamic enough about the images. Nice shots they just need some ummph.
 
I think you pretty much hit the nail on the head!

The view was really nice in Southport but once its been shot it somehow loses a bit (well in this case maybe alot). I could see the Blackpool tower & 'The Big One' but you can't make it out on shot 2.

thanks for your thoughts people :)
 
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