Watchtower of Infiorata

Very interesting.
However the individual takes are rather too short for me.
 
A fantastic first effort. Did you study film making? I agree the takes are too many and too short to be absorbed by the viewer. I think the takes could easily have been twice as long. I see you often cut on the beginning of a measure of music. With music this fast, maybe cutting on every second measure could work. Still, a beautiful story is told here.
 
I disagree with some of the other comments about the speed of cuts. There's maybe 10-15 cuts that's seem a little fast but the rest I think the pacing is great. The point is not to concentrate on each shot but to see how the entire story is built and for that I think it's done very well.

I do wonder why you label these posts a NSFW as I don't think there's any content that would be classed 'not safe'.

.........unless it's click bait..........
 
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