Critique Waterfall at Gordale Scar, North Yorkshire

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My own personal opinion(which may be completely wrong) is that your white balance is out.
Water looks too blue and the moss looks too green. Were you using a Hi tech filter by any chance?
 
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The water would have been blue if I hadn't used a brush and changed the colour of it.

No filters used.
 
mickledore said:
My own personal opinion(which may be completely wrong) is that your white balance is out.
Water looks too blue and the moss looks too green. Were you using a Hi tech filter by any chance?
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:agree: Nice image, It makes me want to look around the corner, which is what you want. But IMHO I think at least the greens need toning down (y)
 
Raptor Mike said:
:agree: Nice image, It makes me want to look around the corner, which is what you want. But IMHO I think at least the greens need toning down (y)
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Thanks

Wish I'd put my 10-stop ND filter on ..
 
I re-processed the image and toned down the green and changed the white balance.

How about this image?
9 exposures
Processed in Photomatix Pro (it's the software I use now for all my HDRs). Then I converted it to black and white.

Used separate brushes for all the waterfalls, brightened them up/added a little clarity.
Masked out the water in the foreground and added some clarity, upped the exposure a little
Darkened the shadows in the whole image.

Janet's Foss, Gordale Scar by Daelpix Photography, on Flickr
 
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