Website Revised

love the portpholio...having them all on one page, makes it so much more enjoyable flicking through... instead of having to wait for each one to load
 
Very nice. Now this is being really picky, but the blue text would look really nice if it was the same green as the car :D Shame its a graphic and not html text, then you could change it really quick just using css.

'Interior design and archatecture'

I'd spell architecture correctly, would be a shame to lose a customer just because there a spelling Nazi.
 
Some great images there - and a well presented website. One small point, your logo.gif looks a bit pixelated around the edges on my monitor. If I download the image and view it it looks fine :shrug:.
Well done though.
 
Yeah I'd agree with Neil, your logo looks pixellated. Surprised you haven't used the same font/logo as your business cards? :shrug:

You might want to reword the "About me" section as well and for some reason the picture of the D300 is underlined.

Looking good though :)
 
The contact form aligns way over left which nothing else does. Logo looks pixelated to me too. Maybe use the one on your business card, keep the branding solid.

The services page is headed about me, don't know why but it bugs me. the whole thing about the cameras and off camera lighting you may as well just drop. People who know about that kind of thing will know, people who don't won't care, and the phrase good lens' seems a bit amatuerish to me.

In my opinion take it out as it says nothing about you, just your gear.

Lastly and my biggest bug bear, is the fact there is nothing but the gallery on the portfolio. No way to go back to any other page, you lose the nav bar, everything.

Look at how you can include at least a back button.

Really looking good though overall, just a fe tweaks left!
 
Like it a lot, very professional and the opening image is amazing :thumbs:

One small thing I would change is the font size for the navigation buttons, I think if maybe you had them slightly smaller and not in capitals it would make it look slicker and match nicely with the car. Sorry I'm nitpicking!

Brilliant site though :thumbs:
 
Probably picky but you asked...

Normally a word with an underline is a link... You have Underlined words that arn't links and links that arn't underlined.. when i see an underlined word I presume its a link.. but then I am an old school surfer :)
 
Looks much better already George :thumbs:
 
Prefer the current one, Why do I need to click Enter site when I already know I want to go there...

I like the little headlights on your current site but I would suggest having them flash and then stop - it got annoying them going off every 2 seconds :p
 
Yeah, I just checked to see if it wasn't stupidity on my part.

The galleries text mixes into the logo (too close in my eyes).

To me would be better to put them on the right hand side, level with the top of the pictures and lined up with the H of Home. Would stand out better and still keep the clean image of the site Just my opinion though.
 
Love the portfolio viewer, very fluid and efficient.
However, might I suggest cutting down the number of images - maybe 10 that are the crème de la crème? You can always have a gallery for others.
 
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