What does it need?

Hi Neil, I'm no expert by any reckoning... however, for what it's worth, here's my input :)

The 'star' is very bright and drags my eye straight to it where it stops - it overwhelms the other components of the image (which actually are far more interesting to look at!)

I think it might improve if there were a 'path' my eye could follow - perhaps by adding some kind of nebulae which leads your eye around the pic? The blue/yellow diagonal line across the pic doesn't really work for me :(

And I would prefer to see the star smaller (and perhaps in that cross shape if you know what I mean) just to make it less overpowering, and different to the smaller stars.

Otherwise, I think it's a fabulous concept - the lego looks great - don't forget to match the lighting on each one ;)

Maria
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I think it's very good but, get all the little cruisers going in the same direction. They appear to be evading each other.

I like it :)
 
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