I'd crop out the nearest right hand post entirely as its causing a 'tilt to the right' illusion, increase detail slightly and that would be it, lovely atmospheric shot!
I know what your looking for.
Is this straight from cam or "edited"
It might be nice, but if its not what you hoped for (and everybodys different), maybe a different approach to edit ?
There maybe detail lost during edit, if not, you'll have to love with it
Its a nice photo, I think you're right about the detail in the blacks, maybe not the distant mountains so much as the posts....whatever, it doesn't make it a scrapper.
I am still pretty fresh when it comes to judging what is and isn't a good shot. I've had a couple I really like get lots of constructive criticism on tp and others (like this), which I was less sure about, get some really positive comments.
I always liked the image but reached a point where I didn't know what to do with it and started questioning if it was even any good in the first place (thus the bin it question).
You guys are a huge help. lesson learnt - go with gut feel and don't be unnecessarily critical of your shots. especially when you are a rookie
Ok, I've spent a while looking at this one as it just doesn't work for me. I've tried a few crops to balance it up but it keeps feeling right heavy. I think that the problem is that you weren't lined up with the jetty and you kinda have to get symmetry bang on if that's what you're doing.
I agree with everyone else that it is a good shot. You should be ver pleased with it. Btw those edts are great, how can you clone so well, all my attempts end up with a blob where i cloned it.
I agree with what dazz said about the lack of symmetry, so pulled it around to try and get things central (and added a spot of split-toning seeing as you like it!):
(the warp and distort softened the image a lot, but you'd get away with it better o the full-size).
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