Wow, very divided opinion here although I think the mono has it by a nose and probably reflects my own slight preference too.
Thanks for the desaturated version Ron, I think if I was to choose the colour one I'd go for a saturation between yours and mine, the ambient warmth was very high when I made that photograph. I had saturated it too much myself though, you were right. I think sometimes I go a little wild on the curves when I should go for a very shallow S.
Thanks again for the comments, they've been really helpful. This forum is really great for constructive crit and advice!