The lighting is fine, but the expression on his face is a little cheesy.
The biggest problem, however, is the completely overworked eyes, and the lipstick look on the lips. Waaaaayyyy too much dodging on the eyes and burning (I assume) on the lips. Looks completely unnatural and total spoils the shot.
The skin work as well has left an unnatural patch where facial hair suddenly disappears.
Rework required imo...