Neither for me I am afraid, for the following reasons. Just in my opinion, I am FAR from an expert!!
1:
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY tooo much foregroundAnd the island is a little too insignificant as a result.
2:
I much prefer this shot, but it seems soft and fuzzy, and I feel it lacks any real vibrancy. I think you could still go with pastels, but just crank it up a little.
Gary.