Your thoughts

[kenbar]

Hi, newbie open to your thoughts, suggestions etc

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[Cris_L]

I like these, I like alternative models. I wonder if you got the background a bit whiter on 1 if it would look a bit better, and perhaps without the hair over her eye?
I really like 2. Good work!

 

[kenbar]

Ill certaintly give that a try, and thanks for the comments

 

[donald]

Number 2 is very good - be interested to see it with the exposure pushed a little more

 

[kenbar]

How does this look

 

[Cris_L]

Personally i think thats a wee bit over exposed, her cheek looks like its lost a bit too much detail to me? I may be wrong though...?

 

[kenbar]

I have to agree with you on that ccomment, ill have to have a better play another time