I like it : definitely a
Is there a reason you cut off the little bit of chin?
is that eye sharp?? and i felt the highlight was a bit too large
hence the edit
cheers
geoff
Sweet picture but it looks a bit posed, she looks away but has no focus.
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harsh honestly v
she isn't looking in to the camera, as far as impact goes, you might as well have shot with the lens cap on.
They don't have to look at the camera, they just have to give something of themselves away.
She's a beautiful girl, but conscious of the camera and maybe following direction that its really a "fun" picture in the end, rather than a dead pan portrait, imo
Technically...looks lovely to me.
Thanks Geoff. Yes in hindsight I guess the catch light was a bit large, but I actually think it's a bit small in your edit. Somewhere in between for me. As for sharpness, I know what you mean but the detail around the eye is crystal sharp (on the original at least) though I have to admit there is a slight softness about the pupil. I think it's just the girl's eyes!