Oh Dawn................................
Where do I start?
I think your evolution pictures are very colourful, and very artistic in their own way. They certainly are a good exercise in using every available filter in PS!
As photographs, however, (after all this is a photography site) I think you have taken the easy option for executing a theme, and I don't think it has done your photography skill any justice.:nono:
You said you didn't want to take just a photo of a building, but why? That is where you can be creative.
How can you take a good photo of a building sign?
Were the letters reflective? Could you have used them to reflect a better scene behind you?
Was it raining, could you have taken a photo of a puddle with the building in the reflection?
What about a shallow DoF that slowly blurred out the letters of Evolution.
What about taking a shot from next to the letters, looking down the length of the word?
I think your photography and your eye for a good photo is more than capable of turning that building into a really good "photo" rather than a colourful piece of art.
That said, I think your use of layers and colour have made a very vivid picture that is very pleasing to the eye.
All the best
Adie