Critique …Singing in the Rain!

[Kodiak Qc]

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I understand the saying now…

 

[htid]

No offence Daniel, but I think this should be in photos for pleasure. This is a critique forum and you know from a technical POV there are loads of things wrong here.

 

[Kodiak Qc]

No offence Daniel, but I think this should be in photos for pleasure. This is a critique forum and you know from a technical POV there are loads of things wrong here.

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Go for it, Chris!

 

[htid]

Haha there;s no point me wasting time typing it out, you know all the things that are wrong with it yourself

 

[htid]

Haha there;s no point me wasting time typing it out, you know all the things that are wrong with it yourself

 

[Kodiak Qc]

Haha there;s no point me wasting time typing it out, you know all the things that are wrong with it yourself

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Don't you think you can to see something I did not?

 

[htid]

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Don't you think you can to see something I did not?

- Out of focus
- Composition leaves something to be desired
- No eye contact/bird going away from you
- There's a full stop at the end of the photo

+ Looks to be pretty well exposed

 

[Kodiak Qc]

- There's a full stop at the end of the photo

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Sorry Chris, this I don't understand what you mean!

 

[htid]

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Sorry Chris, this I don't understand what you mean!

A period as you might say (I know that's what americans say but not sure about French Canadians) This: .

 

[Kodiak Qc]

A period as you might say

I corrected that. Thanks.

Out of focus

Well let's say soft… the rain screw up the focus-
sing, but you're right.

Composition leaves something to be desired

This decision is based on the wrong focus point
on rain drops before the target so I left the FG
water that was sharper.

No eye contact/bird going away from you

Right, like someone said: "no eye, no duck!" 99%
of the facing birds are nor necessary looking at the
photographer! … otherwise they would smile! … don't
you think!


Still, not dancing but singing in the rain!

 

[Kodiak Qc]

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Shot of the same duck a few moments before the rain…

 

[htid]

Haha that's better and made me laugh