Here goes, and taking into account the gear you are using.
1. Decent shot, focus seems to be on the eye just a pity about the harsh light but a decent attempt.
2. Lovely posed Robin but you have plenty of scope with that one for PP so i would be looking at doing a lot of PP with that one mainly some USM, Curves etc. If you have the original i would like a bash at the full size version.
3. Hasnt really got anything going for it.