I like the first
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Number one for me too
I like the first, and the third(although I'm not too keen on the cyclist, but it isn't too distracting)....I don't like the tilt of the second though
True.... the image itself is fine, just not the angle...and nor do I like the window encroaching on the left.Tilts certainly aren't for everyone.
True.... the image itself is fine, just not the angle...and nor do I like the window encroaching on the left.
I quite like #2, but #3 is the pick of the 3 for me.
3 for me, love the hairlight, and i quite like the cyclist in, i dont think it distracts, nice image Ryan
Like 1, love 3 dislike 2. Bike adds to pic on #3 IMHO, but the hilighty bit on the cyclist may be tone it down a smidge.
BTW Ryan, I have noticed a bit of a camel toe in #3.
really like the third one, she seems to be a bit uncomfortable in the first two
Really like the feel of these Ryan.
I would have moved the hand ever so slightly away from the face though and have tried one with her chin tilted down slightly in the first too.
2nd would have been my fave if not for the tilt, but we've already been there above so won't go there again!
Loving No's 1 and 3 not keen on the tilt in No2 to be honest, but each to there own,all well exposed and sharp
Les
Pretty much agree with the comments so far.
I quite like #1.
#3 is the standout shot for me.
My first thought on seeing #2 was that she looks like she's bursting for a pee.
I like them all but number 3s my fav pic i like the cyclist ellement
I like them all but number 3s my fav pic i like the cyclist ellement
Lovely set, mate. Some of your best work here with a real fashion feel.
Loving #1 Ryan. It almost has a Parisian feel to it.
All 3 work for me. Just remove the cyclist.
The third is really nice... but why did you not wait for the cyclist to pass??? ...and crop the bollard from the extreme right.
The second has some problems for me. The pose looks awkward.. looks like she's desperate for the loo. That angle doesn't really do anything either, except annoy the viewer... and as others have said, the windows poking into the frame is a bit sloppy. I'm just left wondering what she's doing.... it's confusing.
The first is the strongest IMO... natural pose... nothing looks forced. Can't help but think it needs to be colour. I really dislike one shot in an otherwise colour set being black and white. It's like you're trying to make me think differently about it... but I don't. The first one and third are the only ones with any narrative that makes sense for me... although the third is just a portrait... the first has a story. Actually..... So does the second, but unfortunately, the story is.... She's locked out of her house, and needs to pee
First one for me. It's the only one that has any style about it. Beautiful lighting in the third... but the first involves me more because of the narrative connotations.
Re cyclist - I actually wanted MORE going on behind.
Sadly all I kept getting was people walking between me and the model
Re pose of the second one - personally I can't believe people think she looks like she needs the loo but each to their own. As I've said before the angle is something you can live with or not.
these images were not designed to be seen as a set (unlike a wedding for example where they would be seen as a set).
Perhaps I should have given each one it's own thread.
My first thought with #2 is that she looks like she's struggling to stand up. Although I can see why people also are saying that she looks like she needs the loo.
I'd expect nothing less from you.
My first thought with #2 is that she looks like she's struggling to stand up. Although I can see why people also are saying that she looks like she needs the loo.
Thanks. You mean I always provide good critique? Right?