Beginner Bath.


…leaning a tad and some halos…
but otherwise a steamy rendition! :)
 
I really need to get my vertical and horizontal lines sorted out,I have a grid so should be easy but my eyes are not what they were,thanks for your comments.
 
I think you've done well with this for composition and processing. Things I'd tweak would have been to try to get the top of the cathedral to not quite touch the building which you were standing below, and to tone down the orange a little on the walls. As Kodiak said there's some haloing, and chromatic aberration where the cloister and sky meet. The light could have been kinder too, but you've seen this very well.
 
I really need to get my vertical and horizontal lines sorted out,I have a grid so should be easy but my eyes are not what they were,thanks for your comments.
I reckon one of my legs is longer than the other, as I always start off sloping. The artificial spirit level display is a godsend though.
 
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