Over all a good set of photos, it's a fantastic place for night time photography during the illuminations...
#1..I like it but would look at applying a little bit of perspective correction to it, I'd knock back the highlights a little, this would with a slight boost to the colours really make it pop, I also crop a little from the bottom and the LHS so that the tram would run completely through the scene..
#2..looks like it needs some CCW rotation and perspective correction but to be honest it's doing little to me, if the static tram had been closer it would have improve the image for me.
#3..again I'd prefer if the tram went fully through frame, but to be honest the composition is let down by have a lamppost in front of the tower
#4..I love that you went for a static shot of the illuminated tram it's one of my regrets of not getting it when I was up there last year, but it would have massively improve the scene if you had waited till it was much closer to you in the scene, you would have also benefited by taking a couple of steps to your left as this would have moved the tower out from behind that lamppost
#5..the whole scene is a bit too dark for me it's not really doing it for me it doesn't screen illuminations
#6..the wet pavement really adds to it given the reflection it gives plus the fact that its the boat tram but its lost in frame and for me there are too many distractions, truth be told I think you'd have been better served not worrying about the tower and getting a lot closer into the tracks and concentrating on the tram
#7..different I like it but I wonder would the have been an option to shoot it from a different angle with less distracting background, probably not knowing Blackpool
#8..It shows how close the roller coaster is to homes
what I would say is it would've been better to have moved a few paces further on to avoid having that lamppost right on the edge of frame as its really highlighting the distortion and draws the eye