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Ok, only joined today and was told to post a few images, I've already added a couple of football shots, here are a couple of my local town. I'm in no way experienced in shooting buldings etc so C&C is more than welcome

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I'm no expert on landscapes but these look OOF to me. It might be my eyes this time in the morning though.
 
Yeah, they're a bit out of focus, but I think the main problem is composition. In both instances the trees and bushes are obscuring the subject of your shot. Try to get a better angle with a bit clearer view. :)
 
Hi trevor,

yes i would also agree that they are out of focus.
I would also add that in my opinion the composition needs to be more dynamic and eyecatching as they are a little dull to look at.

hope this helps a little

Ewan
 
Thanks all for the comments.

As I said I'm not great at shooting buildings and its obvious I need to improve. As to them being OOF, it must be my conversions because the RAW images look pin sharp, again an area that needs much improvement on my part
 
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