Critique Flaine - French Alps Sunrise

[Mat0tam]

Only got 1 clear morning and I may have slightly overslept!
Was a 3 shot Pano - Pretty happy with how it turned out.
Maybe needs a crop to move the context more central?

 

[Mountains&Waves]

Lovely light and control of the highlights, but I don't think you have considered foreground interest. Always think to yourself 'how can I make this composition simple?'

 

[Mat0tam]

Lovely light and control of the highlights, but I don't think you have considered foreground interest. Always think to yourself 'how can I make this composition simple?'

Agreed, I think I should have maybe left the apartment and headed down to near the JCB (Bottom left).
Was shot from inside through the balcony doors. I could of maybe used the doors to frame the shot?

 

[Kodiak Qc]

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The idea to have the village is cool as it gives a great feeling of the
dimension of the scene but that big roof is too much.

The golden tones everywhere and the well controlled high keys are
just right. Though I would heal out the jet track.

 

[69Bonni]

I've seen this before.... There's that JCB again!

 

[Craig20264]

Foreground is very dominant so I've tried to use it to send the eye down the row of properties.

 

[viv1969]

It's a scene I'd love to see in person.