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these pictures where taken today 20/5/09, they are my best ones so far i think, what do you think?

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C&C welcome, Thanks :)
 
Sorry, I havent seen your other shots to compare but I think these are good.

Generally pretty well exposed and fairly sharp.

2 is my favourite, it does have some slightly blown highlights though.

A good set though :)
 
thank you, the sun was very bright, it was hard trying to get the right angles but i think they turned out ok :)
 
I know that I looked at your last pics and didn't feel that they were as good as they could have been. Looking at these, you have clearly taken on the comments made in previous posts, and really looked at different angles to take the pictures from. These are hugely better, so well done.

I think you need to get this composition as second nature then looking at other areas, such as exposure and overall clarity. It will come I am sure, so stick at it - Hope that helps.
 
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I saw your previous set and these are much much better. Well done for listening, learning and then putting it into practice.(y)
 
1 and 3 don't have enough impact, probably due to the horse being too small in the frame. The rest aren't bad at all, definite improvement, #2 probably being the pick for me, good job :)
 
NUmber 2 is the best for me.

As I did some fairly heavy critique on your last set, I have to say these are a world away. Your moving away from snapshots and thinking about what you want.

The timing on the last 3 is great, just in mid air, but if you were the other side of the jump, you would be shooting the sunny side of the horse, rather than the side in shade. THis would show much more detail in the features of both the horse and rider. It doesn't help you have a dark horse in the shot.

If I am being really picky about the first shot, because you have a dark horse, the sky as the background is great, but the horses face has tress behind it, which just make it a tough harder to see. If it had been nice blue sky, that would be a really crisp profile of the horses head.

Also with 2, as you have the MP to crop the shots, try and not to zoom quite so much. The tail is slightly chopped off, I don;t think it detracts from the photo, but would add if it was all in.

Now go and get some more, show us how you can improve again with the next set.

Well done.
 
thanks, i really appriciate your comments.

i am still tring new things with it and will hopefully get a perfect one soon :)

thanks
 
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