Can I edit a post?
Thanks for the feedback again - as I can't see how to edit here is the thinking behind them:
Mineral - This is exactly how I see a mineral - it's the end of a geological process and it looks organic - like spores erupting from fungus.
Sense - It was just the look of the in focus person and the feeling he was giving off whilst looking out the window - and the contrast to the out of focus person. To me it was sense on a few levels.
Ending - It's the end of the day, the end of our shoot and it was nearly the end of the walk. On a much more personal and emotional level for me it's my father, he's well into his 60s and something changed on this trip, I'm normally the one that falls over (through messing about) - this time he slipped 4 times, I was trying to work out how I could carry him back up to the road if needed and I was also carrying his bag and tripod up the hill to help him out. I'm in my 30s, in lots of ways childhood has obviously ended - but this was the first time it's felt like that in this type of a situation.
There you go