I think some people 'lift shadows' too much and in this case think somewhere between Phil's edit and the original would be better, although the mid tones might then suffer
Hiya Nick, it was more an edit for the sake of devilment if I'm being honest, I knew Daniel wouldn't appreciate it, all i did was just lift the shadows to the point the whites still held detail
.......as Daniel always points out, more could be achieved with the raw file!
@Kodiak Qc Daniel, as I said above, more a bit of devilment, but I do have to wonder why a lot of your shots do 'appear' too dark or under-exposed?
Its obvious your a knowledgeable chap. I have no idea of the weather conditions on the day but I'm sure the water wasn't as dark as that, neither the swans. I'm sure the shots could be brighter and still hold all detail in the whites with water the right shade, to reflect conditions on the day.
I'm not looking to argue, so I hope this comes across as a genuine enquiry, I just don't see how the shot could be a true representation of the conditions on the day.
The only other thing I can think, are you going for artistic merit? Nothing wrong if you are, but for me, wildlife shots should look like, or as close to, they did on the day the shot was taken.
I will admit, I do find it hard to comment/crit most of your shots as they all either look too dark, or as Wez said, a little under exposed, sorry