Kittiwake

[Mickwreay]

Taken at Marsden rocks

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any C&C please?

Mick

 

[Mickwreay]

Anythoughts?

 

[akr]

Hi Mick

#1 - looks a little soft. I'd try and lose the black bit on the left. Not sure if the white is a little blown.

Gives a nice perspective of where it is nesting.

#2 not quite sure what I am supposed t be looking at, bird on the left, right etc so eyes keep wandering, i.e I don't think there is enough of a focal point for me.

Hope that helps

Al

 

[targetman]

Never going to easy with any white bird in the U.K. looking really good to me Mick well done.

 

[Mickwreay]

Hi Mick

#1 - looks a little soft. I'd try and lose the black bit on the left. Not sure if the white is a little blown.

Gives a nice perspective of where it is nesting.
Al

You may well have a point on #1

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#2, it was nearly impossible to get a side on view never mind a lone bird :shake:

I have cropped No1 in photobucket but it will not display on here :-(


Thanks to you both for the C&C

Mick