Lady on the beach

I think there are a couple of things I would have considered doing differently, although without knowing what else is around there, I could be totally off the mark.

The sky is a tad overexposed, so I would have used a filter, either ND grad to bring the sky down to a more equal exposure or a polariser to get it nice and blue.

The other thing is composition - I don't think I would have filled the frame with the boat. It looks old and sorry for itself, so (if possible ) I would have moved back, put it more on the thirds line and included to the left some desolate beach and sea. That to me would have given it a more punchy compostion than you have there.

However, there may be a great big hotel to the left, or lots of people in the nuddy!! :D
 
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