I (almost) agree with CT here!
I like it too, I'm not too keen on the blue look (though I guess it could be the 'Moonlight' type you were after? Just a bit too blue for that)
But I reckon there's a tiny bit too much space at the top rather than not enough
Oh - and be a sport and allow editing of your shots, it's often easier to 'explain' what you're getting at by an example of one's own edited image
Edit - I hadn't seen the conversion to just BW when I posted just now, it is better IMO too - till needs a tad off the top though