New design website

Buttons are too big for my liking... childlike... sorry :)

also

As I own the server and develop the site and content

You sure about that?
 
Hello

Whist I do not wish to offend in any way, in my person opinion, the website looks very amateur as opposed to professional.

I quite like the large buttons however but would prefer the words to be centred.

I think a border round the main content would work better as the heading image expands past the links.

On the coding front, the site is layed out using tables which is not the best approach and it fails a HTML validator.

I know how to code in HTML, CSS, PHP etc so apologise if my comments are offending but i am just being honest.

Its a decent start and the content is there I just think it needs to be more professional and layed out a bit better, especially as this is for a business
 
The first thing that jumps out is the logo being all pixelated.

Are your prices really unbeatable, even by the person offering to shoot for free?
 
I like your minimalist approach to HTML - it's far more likely to work cross browser though I'd suggest using em instead of px for margins.
In IE8 you get a javascript error caused by onmouseover on the menu buttons which have no submenu.
I quite like your 100% width header but I'd run it past a free website that will generate screenshots of various browsers to check cross-browser compatibility.
But I'm afraid the worst problem is invalid HTML - Firefox tries to fix it before rendering leaving an empty TABLE below the main content. This hedging by the browser is a major cause of browser compatibility problems. If you to run it past a free HTML page validator then it will tell you what needs fixing.
Once you fix the HTML then you may find that the TABLE margin may cause scroll bars on some browsers; it will need checking.
Sorry for being terse - I'm supposed to be doing other things ;)
Duncan
 
Sorry bud but I dont like it. As the others said, the design is very amateurish and basic and doesnt work well for someone offering a creative service. Also it looks horrid at lower screen resolutions as everything bunches up.

It works nice and fast due to the simple coding which is a bonus, but I would really look at the design elements in a lot more depth.

Sorry, but am only giving some honest criticism :(
 
Sorry to add to the negatives. Bad design. Pixelated logo, galleries bugged the hell out of me, took ages loading, maybe that is just my connection though. Header is way too big, as are buttons. To me it looks dated, the glow round the text in the logo etc. Really you need to redesign your logo to and work from there.

Also in portraits you have a family, then 2 girls in a very Nuts magazine way, the issue there is, if you are looking for a portrait photographer to shoot your family, girls with Lads Mags poses are not going to interest you and will turn you off using the photographer, and vice versa.

You say you are a wedding photographer, but a blind look through your site did not make me realise that.

Sorry to add to the negativity here, but it would not make me hire you, which is what the site is meant to do.
 
I think your banner scales too much!
"963px × 211px (scaled to 2032px × 445px)"

Its not as bad for me as i dont have a widescreen monitor but if i did that would be well on the way to taking up half the page.. specially once you take into consideration the task bar and the top of the browser.

Also on my screen the gallery ends up next to the menu bar rather than underneeth.
 
Hello everyone.

I'm Gary's dad and he's given me permission to contribute to this thread.

First, I'd like to thank you all, for taking the time to take a look and offer your comments and criticisms. It is invaluable to us, in order that we can continue to develop the site and try to present it in a way that is acceptable to the majority of people.

You will all realise I'm sure, that like all types of presentation, design is very much a personal thing and with that in mind, it is inevitable that what some like, others won't.

I'd like to share with you some of the things I've been doing this weekend as a result of your collective comments.

First I'll deal with the most controversial; the buttons! As I designed them, I take full responsibility for their acceptance - or not. I liked them, as did noneforit, but the consensus is negative, so as soon as I get time, I'll redesign them to hopefully better reviews! Ironically, they are the same size as those on the original site, but with more rounded corners and larger text. It's the text I feel, that may be the major cause of dissatisfaction.

Probably the next most serious (if not the first) is the pixelated logo. We agree with you 100%. It was robbed from the original site, which did not span 100% and quite honestly, we didn't realise what a mess it would look and hence we screwed up. This is Gary's department and as soon as he has redesigned a new banner, it will be uploaded. While I'm on this subject, a million thanks to DiddyDave, who spotted "Portait" rather than "Portrait". I don't know how many people we've had look at this site, but you are the first sir, to spot such a glaring error!

As far as coding and html validation is concerned, one of the design goals was getting rid of all the crap that site generators (like Dreamweaver) produce. In other words, I wanted "clean" code throughout. It was also desirable, that the site would work cross platform and to a great degree, that's worked. I've been testing it this weekend in Safari (it works well) and a friend of mine tested it on his mobile (symbian), and I also know it works on the iphone. As with all design, there are trade-offs and on balance, I think it's about right. To get back to pure validation, it mostly fails on lack of alt tags, though there are other issues. This was quite deliberate, as it seemed pointless to me, having a photography site where you couldn't see the images. Why bother to visit? The alt tags, although being small in the scheme of things, were simply an unnecessary overhead. The other point I would make, I've yet to come across a web site that validates 100%. I'm sure they exist, but most don't. For example, I was on a major commercial USA computer site last night that had nearly 270 errors! That's not to say it's not desirable, but it's not a priority either.

Thanks for pointing out the table problem; that's been rectified and was a result of copying and pasting sections of content from he old site, which included that code. My subsequent review, missed the code and strangely, it didn't show up in my testing.

As far as loading speeds go ding76uk, I think you have either a slow connection or something wrong. While I admit to many problems, speed of loading is not one of them. However, your comments regarding how the gallery's are structured, is good sound advise and we'll look at that in the future. In fact, as a direct result of your further comment about lack of focus on weddings, we're planning yet another roll out in the future, which will effectively split the site into two parts; one dedicated to weddings. Thank you for that.

To DuncanDisorderly and Jacob, I think I've found the cause of the problem you found with the page splitting and fixed it. The page will still contract below 1024x768, but that's how it's designed.

Jacob, if you have less than 1024px width or you don't have your browser fully open, that will happen.

However, I can't at the moment reproduce your javascript error Duncan, but I'll look into that further.

To anyone I haven't addressed personally, your comments are just as valid and some will have been addressed by others commenting on the same subject. So thank you all for your valuable contributions.

My best wishes to you all and an early Happy Christmas.

Paul.
 
On my 1920x1200 monitor the galleries are beside the menu too.
 
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