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1) Add some pictures!
2) I think that you should have photography under your logo (in the header) to make it clearer that you are a photography buissiness
2) I think that you should have photography under your logo (in the header) to make it clearer that you are a photography buissiness
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Hi Phil,
Some images would improve your pages dramatically, also, I think you need to explain your wedding packages in depth, it looks like you have four prices for the same package, I don't think the free website does you any favours either, nice simple layout though.
Pete
Some images would improve your pages dramatically, also, I think you need to explain your wedding packages in depth, it looks like you have four prices for the same package, I don't think the free website does you any favours either, nice simple layout though.
Pete
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wedding packages - you list all the shots. Lets say you miss one, how much rebate do I get 
not a good idea to list shots imho
not a good idea to list shots imho
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3 Things jump out to me
1. You are a photography site, yet hardly any pics!
2. On your car dealers page it states: Any editing work is done free of charge unless made by special request of the client. This does not read right to me, are you trying to say that All editing work is included with the cost, unless any specialist processing is requested by the client, in which case there will be an additional charge?
3. You are saying you are a professional company yet on the bottom of your site it says created by Yola. A free website creator. This does for me not look professional.
1. You are a photography site, yet hardly any pics!
2. On your car dealers page it states: Any editing work is done free of charge unless made by special request of the client. This does not read right to me, are you trying to say that All editing work is included with the cost, unless any specialist processing is requested by the client, in which case there will be an additional charge?
3. You are saying you are a professional company yet on the bottom of your site it says created by Yola. A free website creator. This does for me not look professional.
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Thank you all i think its time to hit the drawing board again.
Phil
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sorry to be critical but noticed a spelling mistake
you spelt various as verious on the want to be a model page near the bottom
you spelt various as verious on the want to be a model page near the bottom
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Just a quick couple of things to check maybe:
Spellings.. guarantee and interest are two I spotted
Easy to do when you're typing/rushing/making a website!
What about changing the link title from Want To Be A Model to Want To Be A Model? Just to make it more direct and perhaps CAR DEALERS to Are you a car dealer? or Run a car dealership? Just thinking if there is anyway you can phrase the title to make it attract more attention from the relevant people, ie models and car dealers, and lessening confusion as in it could read to some that you WANT TO BE A MODEL, or that you are or have a list of CAR DEALERS.
Does that make sense? Make it easy for the visitor, even if it's easy for you or us it might not be so obvious to the target audience because their focus (no pun intended) is elsewhere.
And as has been said... PHOTOS.. lot's of good photos is number 1!
Spellings.. guarantee and interest are two I spotted
Easy to do when you're typing/rushing/making a website!What about changing the link title from Want To Be A Model to Want To Be A Model? Just to make it more direct and perhaps CAR DEALERS to Are you a car dealer? or Run a car dealership? Just thinking if there is anyway you can phrase the title to make it attract more attention from the relevant people, ie models and car dealers, and lessening confusion as in it could read to some that you WANT TO BE A MODEL, or that you are or have a list of CAR DEALERS.
Does that make sense? Make it easy for the visitor, even if it's easy for you or us it might not be so obvious to the target audience because their focus (no pun intended) is elsewhere.
And as has been said... PHOTOS.. lot's of good photos is number 1!
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Had a look at your site Phil and I'd echo what the other's have said. I did notice that you've since added images and accreditation. Are these images yours and are you accredited? I also noted on your Purestorm account (that your site links to) that you have images that aren't yours (unless you are Jason Cole in disguise).
I'd suggest you remove them as it's not very professional.
I'd suggest you remove them as it's not very professional.
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I knew I recognised that bath shot!
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Mega apologies to all involved didnt make the profile myself had a friend who is also on here and until I checked it and spotted them I didnt realize I have since removed all and place some of MY shots on there. I will be speaking to him very soon and he will be getting an ear full!!!
Once again guys please take my apologies I honestly didnt realise and as you guys will see from my prev post's I dont borrow images off anyone else.
Sorry to all
Phil
Once again guys please take my apologies I honestly didnt realise and as you guys will see from my prev post's I dont borrow images off anyone else.
Sorry to all
Phil
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I feel for you mate. I suspect you did it yourself, and I can understand how embarrassing it is. I won't hold it against you, I guess either way, you will learn from this.
Gary.
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OK guys I owned up and said sorry so can we please leave it out with the "you did it your self" and "most awkward situations"
Phil
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I don't like the blue on blue that your site uses, there just isn't enough variation in the colours from the background to the main page.
Your head is a little too big. viewing on a 17" and browser dependant I am losing 1/4 to 1/3 of the web page just to the header.
Your "Contact Us" page could do with a few more pixels between the entry fields as it looks too cluttered.
And finally, can you not create a gallery on the website instead of linking to Purestorm? I just find it so annoying having to leave a site to see what work you've done.
Your head is a little too big. viewing on a 17" and browser dependant I am losing 1/4 to 1/3 of the web page just to the header.
Your "Contact Us" page could do with a few more pixels between the entry fields as it looks too cluttered.
And finally, can you not create a gallery on the website instead of linking to Purestorm? I just find it so annoying having to leave a site to see what work you've done.
