1 and 3 are great.
4 Is good but you have a lot of dead space on the right.
2 is a bit of a 'meh' shot, looks like it was taken just after the peak of the interesting action in shot 1, but with less emotion. The mono conversion hasn't made it more interesting either.
If it was my set, I'd remove no 2 and just have it as a good set of 3 shots.
There is definitely an artistic intent expressed in these
and this is a sign of a maturing process… applause!
I like the B&W tonal range very much but I would sug-
gest to revisit the WB of 3 & 4 though I know darn well
it may be difficult with some crazy stage lighting!
I think the WB is OK , keeping the stage lights in thought. in nr 4 there is some green in the jacket coming from green lights. I normally thake the black of the mic als reference point for the wb-picker. Photo 2 is form me about the emotion on the face and I wanted a BW in the set but I agree that is the weakest of the set..
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